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Butterflies...
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 04:01:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i miss the times when i was eager
to catch a smile when they would leave her
like butterflies, they would flutter by
the moments i would let her sigh
.......
i wish for times when days were young
when i sat with her through times of fun
dancing slow to a lady in red
feeling my heartbeat's drum instead
......
memories are my heart's lone fear
she's seems so far yet seems so near
what's been across the span of years
was captured in a few wet tears
.....
memories...memories
raining down....
pouring...pouring...
without a sound...
dw
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Re: Butterflies...
(User Rating: 1 ) by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 04:29:50 AM AEST (User
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this write took my heart and made it stop , you summed up love with such sadness and simplicity. it hurts we all know, because someone who did love us, or say they did, really did not at all. sorry the tears flowed, been there and done that as well. but we all have to know because one breaks the heart, does not mean all will. take care
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Re: Butterflies...
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 03:26:22 PM AEST (User
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Flowing lovely write, I enjoyed the way you compared the memories, love and kisses to that of the butterfly nice really nice.
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