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and then alot of people told me she was disliked by so many.
I liked this little girl that i went out and brought her a bike.
to ride.
and then a kite.
The little girl had a house that looked like a ghostlike.
alot of things happened there in the house.
There was a cat that the little girl liked
and she named the little cat after her mom.
She called the cat mom.
Because she forgot the cats name.
The cat was brushy and had a grey tail with white in it.
well after all of this time spent with the little girl i found out she was also a ghost and i just didnt know it.
untill the neighbors told me later on that lived near by the little girl.
The little girl and her mom died in that house and noone knew what happened to them. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

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Contributed by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 12:59:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There was this little girl who look just alike i did when I was little.
and then alot of people told me she was disliked by so many.
I liked this little girl that i went out and brought her a bike.
to ride.
and then a kite.
The little girl had a house that looked like a ghostlike.
alot of things happened there in the house.
There was a cat that the little girl liked
and she named the little cat after her mom.
She called the cat mom.
Because she forgot the cats name.
The cat was brushy and had a grey tail with white in it.
well after all of this time spent with the little girl i found out she was also a ghost and i just didnt know it.
untill the neighbors told me later on that lived near by the little girl.
The little girl and her mom died in that house and noone knew what happened to them.

Copyright © Butterflygirl40 ... [ 2007-08-20 12:59:35]
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Re: LIKE (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 02:34:54 PM AEST
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Butterfly,
I really enjoyed this read. I think this is one of my favorites. I was able to easily picture this little story in my mind's eye. This would be great as a children's story...I can see lovely black and white/sepia colored photos in the book. This flowed out from you nicely. Well done.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

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