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You look at me
Contributed by
pecjak
on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 11:29:29 AM in AEST
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You look at me
sad
and I recall
the sea
and the smell
of the breeze
coming
towards me,
and I recall
the sky
and the stars
that filled me
with some emptiness
which
I could not explain.
Perhaps
I felt
then
what was
to be.
An empty world.
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pecjak
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2007-08-19 11:29:29]
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Re: You look at me
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 11:38:00 AM AEST
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hey brilliant post, i got a really ghostly feeling off it, short and sweet, just how i like em.
well done!!!
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Re: You look at me
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by endlesspath on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:25:44 PM AEST
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wow scariness felt full of chills and pain.
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Re: You look at me
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by xxx_lover on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 01:11:42 PM AEST
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| I agree with the others...the simplicity mixed with the subject matter is inspiring. |
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