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Array ( [sid] => 136831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i fell when i wrote this idea [time] => 2007-08-19 07:32:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i search for for somber sounds and foliage of brown and black
only to find your satire colors of discontent and mimic

i find we throw all that time has taught for fancy toys and flashing lights
amazing that we could go to the moon but feeding hunger they say is impossible
i speak my words of please but i must be talking in tongues just senseless knowledge
about black towers that haven't even been grown and greed filling our cups
we are just scraping the sky and see if there is property to own on heaven

somewhere lost in the ages we believed in true nature
seeking plants for illness and food
now in sciences name we eat from tubes make believe dinners

so we come and go seeking knowledge from tree to tree breaking every branch
and like the wild we are we feast and gorge and sell the broken tree of fruit
profit not future is better then nothing [comments] => 1 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

i fell when i wrote this idea

Contributed by lostrelic on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 07:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i search for for somber sounds and foliage of brown and black
only to find your satire colors of discontent and mimic

i find we throw all that time has taught for fancy toys and flashing lights
amazing that we could go to the moon but feeding hunger they say is impossible
i speak my words of please but i must be talking in tongues just senseless knowledge
about black towers that haven't even been grown and greed filling our cups
we are just scraping the sky and see if there is property to own on heaven

somewhere lost in the ages we believed in true nature
seeking plants for illness and food
now in sciences name we eat from tubes make believe dinners

so we come and go seeking knowledge from tree to tree breaking every branch
and like the wild we are we feast and gorge and sell the broken tree of fruit
profit not future is better then nothing

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2007-08-19 07:32:48]
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Re: i fell when i wrote this idea (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 10:55:35 AM AEST
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Relic,
Another wonderful write about the "man" and what he is doing to this Earth, to all it's inhabitants. Your brave and kind heart shows through in your writes. my friend.
Much peace,
Laura

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