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I came here to write
yet my words remain hidden
I came with ambition
yet nothing is written

I came with a fire
that's built upon passion
I came with tears
and a heart deeply saddened

I came with a need
that is yet to be filled
and brought forth my wounds
that they might be healed

I came here to write
this much I've said
to sum up my feelings
like raising the dead

I came here to write
or maybe just hide
from all of my fear
I've buried inside

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Hidden words

Contributed by wordsy on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 09:35:02 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession

I came here to write
yet my words remain hidden
I came with ambition
yet nothing is written

I came with a fire
that's built upon passion
I came with tears
and a heart deeply saddened

I came with a need
that is yet to be filled
and brought forth my wounds
that they might be healed

I came here to write
this much I've said
to sum up my feelings
like raising the dead

I came here to write
or maybe just hide
from all of my fear
I've buried inside

Copyright © wordsy ... [ 2007-08-18 21:35:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:09:34 AM AEST
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beautiful, well written, succinct and powerful. I truly enjoyed this. thank you and please keep posting!

Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 03:41:12 AM AEST
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And I am so glad you "came here to write". I enjoy reading you. This was a brief piece but it had so much to say.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 04:27:40 AM AEST
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writing and letting words flow as yours are wondeful and soothing to the mind. you have such talent to make all readers still think and see. love your work

endless

Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 02:11:44 PM AEST
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and write you did, wonderful write,
Michelle

Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 03:16:24 PM AEST
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Loved the write. awsome flow, rhythm and rhyme. nicely done.

Re: Hidden words (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 09:37:20 PM AEST
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I think it is just the way of a true poet that even though when words have been put to paper it is never enough. A poet is always striving for more, for a better way to express how they feel, a way to soothe those doubts that not even extensive editing can provide. So although you have obviously written and posted on here it perhaps never feels like enough to get to the depths you are trying to plumb.
I hope that makes some sort of sense, but that is just what I took from this piece. Very well written also!

Take care,
Dom

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