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Array ( [sid] => 136811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As Night Turns to Dawn [time] => 2007-08-18 08:02:06 [hometext] => For Chris, because he said that I was dedicating too many poems to Byron...(this is shorter than my other poems) [bodytext] => A single tear escapes down her cheek.
She chokes back sobs as she tries to speak.
Her voice sounds feeble, weak, and chilled.
She knows that the void in her soul will never be filled.
She tries to fight off her demons, but they are too strong.
She now knows the difference between right and wrong.
Her guilt tears at her, tormenting her mind.
She searches for comfort, a luxury she may never find.
When had she finally lost control of her life?
When had she surrendered to heartache and strife?
Finally she starts healing, as night turns to dawn.
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As Night Turns to Dawn

Contributed by AnenaLynne on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 08:02:06 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A single tear escapes down her cheek.
She chokes back sobs as she tries to speak.
Her voice sounds feeble, weak, and chilled.
She knows that the void in her soul will never be filled.
She tries to fight off her demons, but they are too strong.
She now knows the difference between right and wrong.
Her guilt tears at her, tormenting her mind.
She searches for comfort, a luxury she may never find.
When had she finally lost control of her life?
When had she surrendered to heartache and strife?
Finally she starts healing, as night turns to dawn.
A body with a broken soul continuing on.

Copyright © AnenaLynne ... [ 2007-08-18 08:02:06]
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Re: As Night Turns to Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by xxx_lover on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 09:16:49 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so easy to relate to that I actually felt like it was about my life....nice work.

Re: As Night Turns to Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 11:09:16 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece, and so easy to relate to.
Well done,
Renni x

Re: As Night Turns to Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST
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This is lovely i was right i do like your writting.
there's an openess about the way you convey your meaning, simple and innocent.
well done . . .

bjps

Re: As Night Turns to Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by love_lost on Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 12:43:01 PM AEST
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i like how this one was shorter than the rest of your works...it works being that short..enjoyed t

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