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morbid desire
Contributed by
Torn_Thomas
on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 10:16:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're beautiful
aesthetically yes, for all with eyes to see
but also in another way only for me
despair,
it seethes from your pores
runs down your sweet neckline
from over your jaw
it wafts and spills,
dismisses and kills
all other interest whilst giving me chills
it thrills me to think of the mind that's inside
that head of yours, locked behind sultry eyes
the torment and fear
that plagues you my dear
will end when you're near
I'll fill you with cheer
I'll drink in your kiss
and absorb your dark fire
you've lately become
my deepest desire
Copyright ©
Torn_Thomas
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2007-08-15 10:16:34]
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Re: morbid desire
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 12:22:04 PM AEST
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Well Torn Thomas, This was an edgy bit of romance. Sort of dark and very sexy. I loved your ending stanza....very nice.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: morbid desire
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 02:42:50 AM AEST
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| This is really great work...I love how you wrote this, as a dark romance, every line is really beautiful. I especially enjoyed the last stanza |
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Re: morbid desire
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 03:00:25 AM AEST
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just... chills
the way you write is.. its shocks me, it feels like im writing it, if you can understand that, thats how much i understand your words... amazing ***** |
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Re: morbid desire
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 03:42:06 AM AEST
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wow that is so hot lol.
love it |
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Re: morbid desire
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 08:08:42 PM AEST
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| Your words echo the warmth to even the most hopeless that love can be comfort. Well put indeed. |
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