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Array ( [sid] => 136724 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => futile rage [time] => 2007-08-14 09:46:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These imbeciles surround me
they can't appreciate the anger i feel towards thee
towards myself for letting you go
They'll never know!
how could they?

"I've lost a love" they say in jest
"it's not that bad!" then why my chest?
do you burn and pound and cause unrest
"you're gone!" i cry
inside my mind
and if i checked i'm sure i'd find
you're happy
you've got a new man

I'd slice his throat on demand
and feel his blood run down my sleeve
as i probed with my thumb to make him bleed
but no i sit here on my bar stool
and smile and joke and play the fool
surrounded by these moronic tools
who claim to know how i feel for you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Torn_Thomas [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

futile rage

Contributed by Torn_Thomas on Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 09:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

These imbeciles surround me
they can't appreciate the anger i feel towards thee
towards myself for letting you go
They'll never know!
how could they?

"I've lost a love" they say in jest
"it's not that bad!" then why my chest?
do you burn and pound and cause unrest
"you're gone!" i cry
inside my mind
and if i checked i'm sure i'd find
you're happy
you've got a new man

I'd slice his throat on demand
and feel his blood run down my sleeve
as i probed with my thumb to make him bleed
but no i sit here on my bar stool
and smile and joke and play the fool
surrounded by these moronic tools
who claim to know how i feel for you.

Copyright © Torn_Thomas ... [ 2007-08-14 09:46:49]
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Re: futile rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Gdo on Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 12:33:57 PM AEST
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I like it a lot.

Re: futile rage (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 02:27:44 AM AEST
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I like your name Torn Thomas. Drew me to read you, and I'm glad it did. I know this feeling, I'm sure many of us can relate. You've written about these feelings well. Damn, how we torture ourselves. Take care.
Much peace,
Laura

Re: futile rage (User Rating: 1 )
by GemmaLouiseRose on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 06:46:50 AM AEST
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Not many poets on here i really admire, i admire you from the very 1st poems youve posted!!

i just love them x

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