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Array ( [sid] => 136703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2007-08-13 08:25:55 [hometext] => Just something I wrote. [bodytext] => She sits alone
Singing that same sad song
Heart cold as stone
Tears rolling down her cheeks
Scared of what she’s been shown
Wishing she still had you here
The wind has already blown.

She sits away from everyone
Smiling that same smile
Scared of what you’ve done
Listening to them so blindly
Can’t get close to anyone
Playing their stupid games
Knowing they’ve already won.

Every step she takes
She pushes him away
All the smiles she fakes
Pretending she’s okay
This morning she doesn’t wake
Tired of being wrong for
Every move she makes.

He believes her lies
She says she loves him
He doesn’t hear her cries
The thoughtful gaze he gives her
When he calls she doesn’t rise
What he did to her, she does to him
Blackens her skies

He calls me on the phone
Asking me how I’ve been
I’m too scared to tell him I’m still alone
Full of hatred inside my head
He tells me he’s on his own
Wishing he could stay
My heart beats for him, though it’s made of stone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 71 [informant] => Karlee14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )
Alone

Contributed by Karlee14 on Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 08:25:55 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets



She sits alone
Singing that same sad song
Heart cold as stone
Tears rolling down her cheeks
Scared of what she’s been shown
Wishing she still had you here
The wind has already blown.

She sits away from everyone
Smiling that same smile
Scared of what you’ve done
Listening to them so blindly
Can’t get close to anyone
Playing their stupid games
Knowing they’ve already won.

Every step she takes
She pushes him away
All the smiles she fakes
Pretending she’s okay
This morning she doesn’t wake
Tired of being wrong for
Every move she makes.

He believes her lies
She says she loves him
He doesn’t hear her cries
The thoughtful gaze he gives her
When he calls she doesn’t rise
What he did to her, she does to him
Blackens her skies

He calls me on the phone
Asking me how I’ve been
I’m too scared to tell him I’m still alone
Full of hatred inside my head
He tells me he’s on his own
Wishing he could stay
My heart beats for him, though it’s made of stone.




Copyright © Karlee14 ... [ 2007-08-13 08:25:55]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 09:59:15 AM AEST
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i think...i can relate to this. parts of it, anyway.

beautiful poem though, great write! i love it! the imagery, the metaphor...lovely. =]

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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mama508 on Thursday, 25th October 2007 @ 05:53:10 AM AEST
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that's pretty deep...
hope things are okay...




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