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bleeding through healed up scars
the sorrow goes deeper as we try to wish
on fallen stars

Parade of life
seems to be ongoining
tears of hurt always flowing
resentment will keep growing

LOST....... in grotesque stories or lies

feed off them.. to plague lives

a million razors scratch out eyes
another bloodshed .... someone dies

rock on ,

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grave calling

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:18:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The grave calls out my name
bleeding through healed up scars
the sorrow goes deeper as we try to wish
on fallen stars

Parade of life
seems to be ongoining
tears of hurt always flowing
resentment will keep growing

LOST....... in grotesque stories or lies

feed off them.. to plague lives

a million razors scratch out eyes
another bloodshed .... someone dies

rock on ,

vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-08-10 04:18:23]
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Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:56:21 AM AEST
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nice....dark, and suductive.
i like it.

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:53:06 AM AEST
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Jennitude, I thought you did an excellent job with this write. Sounds like everyday life, huh?
"Rock on", sister.
Peace,
Laura

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 09:17:07 AM AEST
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This is awesome, i felt your descriptions and ouch they hurt. Excellant writting Jenni, truly consistant your style is.

Ben

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:36:03 AM AEST
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Holy heck Jenn!!! Where do these come from?

WOW! I'm impressed, hun! Your descriptions are fabulous.
So much pain within this. I love, LOVE the first stanza so much.
It is entirely moving!

Excellent post, hun! ADORE this one

~Breezy

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 10:21:15 PM AEST
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Dark indeed, Jenni but with much observation of the human condition. A lot of deep material comes in a flash. Thought provoking.

S.

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 11:55:00 AM AEST
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Very seductive in a very deep and dark way. Awesome job.

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 12:39:40 PM AEST
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excellent write jenni:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:15:17 PM AEST
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Remarkable writing.
Huggs, emy
I also agree with deadheadpoet. Sounds like every day.

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 08:09:12 PM AEST
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You do such a fabulous job on these writes.Another enjoyable piece.

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 07:11:17 AM AEST
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Love this. Dark, eerie, and beautiful.

Take care
Christina

Re: grave calling (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:22:42 PM AEST
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Ok so Im falling in love with your work.
--kevin
the lonely vagabond

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