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Array ( [sid] => 136607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NEW START [time] => 2007-08-09 11:32:17 [hometext] => to new and new finds [bodytext] => shall I try and see
what I believe
the endless write
that gives the life to breath

I have seen a greater start
From one who has the gift of Art


They are filled with total sincere:
So how do I make it clear

I'm not here to take thy heart
Just to you ;I give and begin, a new start

No materlistic do I seek
Just truth , honesty and all the friendship



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NEW START

Contributed by endlesspath on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:32:17 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



shall I try and see
what I believe
the endless write
that gives the life to breath

I have seen a greater start
From one who has the gift of Art


They are filled with total sincere:
So how do I make it clear

I'm not here to take thy heart
Just to you ;I give and begin, a new start

No materlistic do I seek
Just truth , honesty and all the friendship







Copyright © endlesspath ... [ 2007-08-09 11:32:17]
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Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:38:46 AM AEST
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the wording can be a little ackward in places but it was overall a good write. The first stanza was awesome.


Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:17:33 PM AEST
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This is a great place to find new things
and friends. See you've already found
me. lol. You should stay here with us
for a good long while. Lovely writing.
Take care , Truly , Doug
ps . I agree with True about the first
stanza.


Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:18:47 AM AEST
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A wonderful fresh start sounds good, all in good time. Sounds promising if one can muster the trust to move ahead.....maybe all in good time aye?


Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:14:18 AM AEST
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a very well expressive write.. i liked the flow its very pleasent to read

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:14:10 AM AEST
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Your poetry is imencly stylish in a simple innocent point blank manner, lovely just lovely, a breath of fresh air if i may say so. truly compelling . . .


Ben


Re: NEW START (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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how refreshing! very good read. Vincent




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