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Array ( [sid] => 136605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal Kingdoms Fallen [time] => 2007-08-09 09:06:07 [hometext] => A write in which my friend True ( please watch for her poem Beautiful Bane ) and I submit different poems yet using the same pic for inspiration [bodytext] =>

~Eternal Kingdoms Fallen~
-----------------------------------------

Castles lying in the mist
Spires crowned in dying ray.
Dusk falling ; silent banners
'neath the giant clouds, they sway

Knights gather 'neath the storm
in rank ; glory in their eyes.
Now they stand defiant forever.
Now they stand , defiantly die

Their blood to save The Raven Queen
( Knights of the Eternal Throne ).
Lo , with pride , she watches now
whilst bravely into hell they go.

Odin , cries the brooding Queen ,
send thy Raven Memory!
See this deed and grant Vahalla
for these ; thy men of bravery!

~The Eternal Kingdoms lie in ruin...
but in Vahalla the brave shall live forever~

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Eternal Kingdoms Fallen

Contributed by doug on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:06:07 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

~Eternal Kingdoms Fallen~
-----------------------------------------

Castles lying in the mist
Spires crowned in dying ray.
Dusk falling ; silent banners
'neath the giant clouds, they sway

Knights gather 'neath the storm
in rank ; glory in their eyes.
Now they stand defiant forever.
Now they stand , defiantly die

Their blood to save The Raven Queen
( Knights of the Eternal Throne ).
Lo , with pride , she watches now
whilst bravely into hell they go.

Odin , cries the brooding Queen ,
send thy Raven Memory!
See this deed and grant Vahalla
for these ; thy men of bravery!

~The Eternal Kingdoms lie in ruin...
but in Vahalla the brave shall live forever~

Copyright © doug ... [ 2007-08-09 09:06:07]
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Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:29:33 AM AEST
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i see the difference in the writes, yet Doug, this is so beautiful..they fight for their queen to the dying end. im lost in this write, with so much vivid scenes crossing through the minds. see the fair queen send her fellow fighters to help proclaim; glory!

endless

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 10:03:38 AM AEST
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Clearly you have written the better of the two. I think you understood this piece so much better than I did. Once again an amazing write.

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 05:51:40 PM AEST
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Very well done. I love the artwork...it does stir the creative mind.

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:12:31 AM AEST
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this is awesome.. I like the imagery.. nicely done.

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:48:13 AM AEST
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holy heck doug! Tremendously and passionately moving, my friend!
A truly glorious description of bygone kingdoms and brave knights.
though, I think your queen looks to be somewhat indifferent ...

truly a most decorative piece filled with stunning descriptions!

~Breezy

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 04:30:19 AM AEST
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very creative and clever on the both of your parts, i like the idea of seeing what you each came up with:)
this poem is fabulous! i love the whole viking aspect and the whole of it-excellent job!!

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 12:47:47 PM AEST
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This was schematic
from a falling princess to fall in feat
Wow
Powerful

Wonderful power write.......yours

Brew~

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Tuesday, 25th September 2007 @ 09:42:31 PM AEST
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Stunning and powerful descriptions throughout, Doug, a most pleasing read!

Take care,
Dom

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 12:54:24 AM AEST
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wow Doug this writes truely amazing .
lol you did a great job on this . :D

Re: Eternal Kingdoms Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:38:30 AM AEST
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Like all your poems, so mysterious, dark, sublime, shadow-like....the poem just sways as in a breeze. Love it.

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