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Erotic dreams of dark desire
Fill my head and drive me mad
A woman perched in deadly silence
Predatory hunger glinting in her eyes
As if she would devour my very soul
She already is
Claws like razors shredding my spirit
She is my Bane
She destroys me with a glance, but I can’t turn away
I see her through dried blood
my blood
As I lay bleeding, dying
She stares in amused fascination
Aroused by the scent of death
And I cannot look away
My death is my offering
To my cruel mistress
My dark love
My addiction
My beautiful Bane
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Beautiful Bane

Contributed by True on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession

Erotic dreams of dark desire
Fill my head and drive me mad
A woman perched in deadly silence
Predatory hunger glinting in her eyes
As if she would devour my very soul
She already is
Claws like razors shredding my spirit
She is my Bane
She destroys me with a glance, but I can’t turn away
I see her through dried blood
my blood
As I lay bleeding, dying
She stares in amused fascination
Aroused by the scent of death
And I cannot look away
My death is my offering
To my cruel mistress
My dark love
My addiction
My beautiful Bane

Copyright Â© True ... [ 2007-08-09 09:00:18]
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Re: Beautiful Bane (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:16:05 AM AEST
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A wonderful offering. I adore it.
I see you've explored the strange
connection between sensuality
and death. It is fascinating how
cruel beauty can be in the right
hands. You have given this picture
life and a dark beauty far beyond what
it had on it's own. Loved it.
Truly , Doug

Re: Beautiful Bane (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:22:43 AM AEST
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seduction here. much came from this piece of art. the pic is like looking at someone who takes and gives... have to say did wonders with the words and picture.

endless

Re: Beautiful Bane (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 04:29:43 AM AEST
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awesome poem, i do believe you met the challenge dead on! an exceptional write!

love n' hugs nessa

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