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The softly whispered tones of love
That allows my heart to see
Beauty in everything

You are a woman unlike any other
A woman who inspires, compels
Me to be a man
Makes me desperate to be a man

That I might compliment
Your sublime feminine gracefulness
Might be worthy of your attention
Worthy of your glance

Everything about you is exciting
You fill me with such aching, longing
Such awe of your breathtaking sensuality
That sometimes I feel actual pain

You make me ache all over
Make me wonder if love is a terminal disease
And if I should be
I ask but one thing

As those whispered tones of love
Gentle urgings of passion carry me to heaven
You and your angelic blue eyes
Are the last things I see

Russ
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Last Things I See

Contributed by Lone_er on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:52:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You are the gentle urgings of passion
The softly whispered tones of love
That allows my heart to see
Beauty in everything

You are a woman unlike any other
A woman who inspires, compels
Me to be a man
Makes me desperate to be a man

That I might compliment
Your sublime feminine gracefulness
Might be worthy of your attention
Worthy of your glance

Everything about you is exciting
You fill me with such aching, longing
Such awe of your breathtaking sensuality
That sometimes I feel actual pain

You make me ache all over
Make me wonder if love is a terminal disease
And if I should be
I ask but one thing

As those whispered tones of love
Gentle urgings of passion carry me to heaven
You and your angelic blue eyes
Are the last things I see

Russ

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Re: Last Things I See (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:59:55 AM AEST
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lots of passion and love there.one can make the world go around with a certain one is inceriable and worth all time and uncertainy.

endless

Re: Last Things I See (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:37:50 AM AEST
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Certainly sounds like true inspiration, long may it continue to be so

Steve

Re: Last Things I See (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 05:44:53 AM AEST
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so beautiful russ, excellent ending too, for who wouldnt wish to die in loves arms?

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Last Things I See (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 02:42:45 PM AEST
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Wow to have that kind of love~!
Sounds wonderful... Is it real.....and where can I find it? :D

brew~ aka dayna

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