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Array ( [sid] => 136591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WORDS OF DECEIT [time] => 2007-08-08 23:17:15 [hometext] => lost for good.moved on. [bodytext] => careless whispers given to one why and how did it all turn to gloom you lead me to beleive ,there was no other to much talk and soon to smother you took the heart i gave to you spread it apart,then tired to soothe so now you come with begging words sorry charlie, they are all a blurr [comments] => 8 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 22 [informant] => endlesspath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove ) WORDS OF DECEIT Contributed by endlesspath on Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:17:15 PM in AEST Topic: LostLove careless whispers given to one why and how did it all turn to gloom you lead me to beleive ,there was no other to much talk and soon to smother you took the heart i gave to you spread it apart,then tired to soothe so now you come with begging words sorry charlie, they are all a blurr Copyright © endlesspath ... [ 2007-08-08 23:17:15] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) WOW! Bravo endless .. I wish I had your strength! That last line is something that I wish more could do and maybe the hurt that some inflict wouldn't be done so carelessly and thoughtlessly. There is power in your conviction. I especially adore the last five words ... Hell, yeah!! ~Breezy Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 01:48:32 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) this is very sad and short but very well expressed. I like the imagery here.. its a poem alot of people who have had their heart broken and moved on can relate to. rock on, vampyress jenni Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by Dom on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 04:23:59 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) The brevity of this increases its emotional impact, and wow that ending is powerful! Great write, Dom Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by True on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:36:38 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) well done. I could see you being one of the better writers on this site. Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by doug on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) This is a painful write. To close to home for my comfort this morning. :) Nevertheless what's one to do. So sorry you had to feel this. Know , however , that you're not alone. Take care , Truly , Doug Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:16:24 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) From one who has had a recent explosion of the heart ,I can read this piece and know I am not the only one who is vulnerable to loves wicked twists and tortures. A solid write that jumped right into my heartspace. Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by myheartsvoice on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:10:06 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) " so now you come with begging words sorry charlie, they are all a blurr " This line is awesome reminds of the old contry tune " Good Time Charlie's Got The Blues" " some gotta win, some gotta loose, yeh good time charlie's got the blues . . . Love this poem will read more, consider it voted for and 5 stars . . . thanks for your comment also . . . Ben Re: WORDS OF DECEIT (User Rating: 1 ) by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:30:22 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) great read supreb. strength is very important keeps us grounded

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