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[title] => Finding Peace
[time] => 2007-08-06 13:55:20
[hometext] => Every now and again we all need time to relax...
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A smoky haze
filled the room
Smell of incense
kills the gloom
Music playing
gentle and slow
Relaxing...supine
Watching the candles glow
Shadows fall
on walls of green
Unimaginable images
in my scene
Peering through aged eyes
Wisps of herbal clouds
waft on by
Dreaming whilst wide awake
Smile...Inhale
Deep breath I take
Leave me in my place
My nest...
All alone
I'll take my rest
7/29/07
Laura Howell Horner
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Finding Peace
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deadheadpoet
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Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 01:55:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A smoky haze
filled the room
Smell of incense
kills the gloom
Music playing
gentle and slow
Relaxing...supine
Watching the candles glow
Shadows fall
on walls of green
Unimaginable images
in my scene
Peering through aged eyes
Wisps of herbal clouds
waft on by
Dreaming whilst wide awake
Smile...Inhale
Deep breath I take
Leave me in my place
My nest...
All alone
I'll take my rest
7/29/07
Laura Howell Horner
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Re: Finding Peace
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:16:16 PM AEST
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Uh, huh!
Sounds like you definently captured the moment.
You go, girlfriend!
very blisfull writing |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Dom on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 07:45:14 PM AEST
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Blissful, peaceful, utterly relaxing!
Glad that you found space in your day to rest and have some time to yourself.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:56:26 PM AEST
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OH MAN! Sis, you got me in desperate need of some, incense, candles,
soft music, cool breezes and ME TIME!!! lol Damn, this was awesome!
Reading this was, to me, as relaxing as being right there with you ..
eyes closed, breathing in, mind cleared ... wow. I love this!!
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~MG |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by needledancing on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:25:25 PM AEST
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| Sounds like a fabulous idea....enter the peace of my mind and think about calmer and more peaceful things in life. I'm lightening up the candles and incense.....wonderful piece with perfect timing for this worn down soul. |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:12:42 AM AEST
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wow this is awesome!! I love how you worded this.. You definately captured the peace of the moment in this.. beautiful job here laurabean
Rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:15:16 AM AEST
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Sounds good to me sis.
How are you doing now days
you did great on this write
hugs |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 04:25:13 AM AEST
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Wow Laura,
This nice piece o' work make me wanna relax all the time ... and I generally do! With ambiguity I say, smile ... inhale 'n' relax. Great work!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 01:24:31 PM AEST
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Dierks Bently sings a song called "I'd settle for a slow down" ... of course he sings it to a woman ... I'd just as soon have it for myself. I would light some incence ... get called away and by the time I returned to enjoy a quiet moment ... I'd need to light more. (Lately anyway)
Well penned, you lil' Dead Header you !!! I hope you find your peaceful place more often.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 11:05:03 AM AEST
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Sounds like fun to me, I simply love the air to this write....... rock on sis!
or smoke on........ or both lol
Michelle |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST
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Om mane poetry om... a most relaxing read. And those herbal clouds - just incense, hmmm?
This one had me breathing deeply and settling into a meditation pose without even consciously thinking about it. We all need our pockets of zen.
Peace, sister.
S. |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by reprobate on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 06:58:33 AM AEST
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This was very nice. I live with incense, candles and non-stop music(or as my youngest son claims:"hippie-junk"). I can appreciate the setting and the 'atmosphere'! Good read, this.
thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Finding Peace
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by forgotten_poet on
Saturday, 25th August 2007 @ 06:30:34 PM AEST
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wow
great poem
i like chill mood
oh and by the way..
the greatful dead is an awesome band.
i like your usename |
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