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Array ( [sid] => 136519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final Escape [time] => 2007-08-05 20:02:03 [hometext] => a story about being in that fog in life that takes us all at one time or another [bodytext] => Final Escape

Slowly it creeps in surrounding me
its thick and its choking
it invades my thoughts and haunts my dreams
the fear & doubt takes me in its arms
like a lovers embrace it hold me
oh such a beautiful requiem
to have lived in the eyes of an angel
and died at the will of a demon
lay me down now and close my eyes
and i will disperse into the hearts and minds
of sinners and saints
and in this world of misery & wretchedness
i collapse to the floor in a delightful insanity
and at the days ending i will cover all that is
upon all that was in salvation
Then stained in blood & tears i spread my wings
and escape... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Immortal-Dragon21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Final Escape

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 08:02:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Final Escape

Slowly it creeps in surrounding me
its thick and its choking
it invades my thoughts and haunts my dreams
the fear & doubt takes me in its arms
like a lovers embrace it hold me
oh such a beautiful requiem
to have lived in the eyes of an angel
and died at the will of a demon
lay me down now and close my eyes
and i will disperse into the hearts and minds
of sinners and saints
and in this world of misery & wretchedness
i collapse to the floor in a delightful insanity
and at the days ending i will cover all that is
upon all that was in salvation
Then stained in blood & tears i spread my wings
and escape...



Copyright © Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2007-08-05 20:02:03]
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Re: Final Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:27:44 PM AEST
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hoping you will find a way through the dense fog and see new light. sorry you are being drawn to hurt. this write hit my heart for I have seen the thick fog.


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