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Array ( [sid] => 136494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => His final breath [time] => 2007-08-05 00:38:28 [hometext] => This is a fictional poem [bodytext] => On one terrifying day in Vietnam my friend was shot.
Most people would've been afraid to die but he was not.
I held him as he took his final breath.
It broke my heart to witness his death.
Before he died, he asked me to look after his wife and kids.
When I came home, that's exactly what I did.
I've given his family moral support over the years.
I've comforted them every time they've shed their tears.
I'm not sure if a broken heart can ever fully mend.
They lost a great father and husband and I lost my best friend. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 32 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

His final breath

Contributed by randyjohnson on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 12:38:28 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

On one terrifying day in Vietnam my friend was shot.
Most people would've been afraid to die but he was not.
I held him as he took his final breath.
It broke my heart to witness his death.
Before he died, he asked me to look after his wife and kids.
When I came home, that's exactly what I did.
I've given his family moral support over the years.
I've comforted them every time they've shed their tears.
I'm not sure if a broken heart can ever fully mend.
They lost a great father and husband and I lost my best friend.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2007-08-05 00:38:28]
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Re: His final breath (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 05:20:57 PM AEST
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Your writing shows that you can relate in many ways, friend.
good work.
big huggs,
emy

Re: His final breath (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 05:20:28 AM AEST
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Great done!
This poem is short but special. It show that you are very kind and friendly, you are really great to keep such a wonderful thing in your mind and doing so good.
I think that you are the right person that your friends have. I am very moved!

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