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Array ( [sid] => 136483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love's End [time] => 2007-08-04 10:10:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The time finally came.
After twelve whole months
Of commitment and dedicating my soul to yours
It’s finally come to an end.

A year I spent with my life only to be with you
And together we were for a third of that time.
And my perfect dream, I soon realized
Was never perfect to begin with.

I had pictured something of a fantasy
A happy ever after fairy-tale
But I should have known before openly giving my heart
That it would soon be shattered.

All the pain witnessed from the start
Giving up me in order to make you happy
I should have known better
I should have known better.

I knew it was the end
When I had to give myself up
Who I had always been was suddenly unappreciated
And taken on a negative note

I will never be unappreciated again
I will never be taken advantage of by you or any other man
I will know better before getting in too deep
But most importantly
Before anyone else
I will trust myself first.

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => billabong_megan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love's End

Contributed by billabong_megan on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 10:10:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The time finally came.
After twelve whole months
Of commitment and dedicating my soul to yours
It’s finally come to an end.

A year I spent with my life only to be with you
And together we were for a third of that time.
And my perfect dream, I soon realized
Was never perfect to begin with.

I had pictured something of a fantasy
A happy ever after fairy-tale
But I should have known before openly giving my heart
That it would soon be shattered.

All the pain witnessed from the start
Giving up me in order to make you happy
I should have known better
I should have known better.

I knew it was the end
When I had to give myself up
Who I had always been was suddenly unappreciated
And taken on a negative note

I will never be unappreciated again
I will never be taken advantage of by you or any other man
I will know better before getting in too deep
But most importantly
Before anyone else
I will trust myself first.

Copyright Â© billabong_megan ... [ 2007-08-04 10:10:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love's End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 11:22:39 AM AEST
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Hopes and dreams sometimes cloud our judgement. Keep your eyes open and you will find what you are looking for. Well write poem.

Mike

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