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[sid] => 136455
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => An Ocean's First Love
[time] => 2007-08-03 14:47:26
[hometext] => Some of the poem makes no sense at all. I however would really love some comments.
[bodytext] => Shells filled with hopes and dreams Are washed onto the beach By the Ocean of sweet surrender A torrent of emotions enter With each passing wave Love doesn't seem so far away Cliffs: Sturdy and strong are Surpassed by raging hurricanes You are my restraint The one person with which I can be calm On my guard endlessly When you're not around Powerful blows can knock down Unsuspecting travelers Fragile will is easily wielded A pure heart will be my undoing My love for you is a little unnerving Boundaries aren't meant to be broken But somehow you've gotten through Was this my wish? My hope? My dream? Of you First love [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 2 [informant] => freemysoul13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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