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[title] => The Black Box
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[bodytext] => Today is a black and empty box filled with nothing and as the day starts slipping away as it gets colder. I am starting to loose all feeling in my body in this blank dark nothing but this is the only comfort I can have cause I知 afraid. After so many years of black. I wonder if I can still see, still feel. Maybe one day someone will find me and take me home and teach me what life really is like. Outside of this numbness that I feel all the time. To love life instead of hoping it値l end and that I値l never have to live another day wanting to pass on to the next life, to be free of this body and to see the beauty if this planet I live on call earth to actually see colour like these so call greens, blues, reds and purples plus all the others I致e only dreamed of. How I wish I could see you, touch you, feel you. To hold you in my arms but until you rescue me from this box. I知 lost
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The Black Box
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Athenus
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Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 04:33:09 AM in AEST
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Today is a black and empty box filled with nothing and as the day starts slipping away as it gets colder. I am starting to loose all feeling in my body in this blank dark nothing but this is the only comfort I can have cause I知 afraid. After so many years of black. I wonder if I can still see, still feel. Maybe one day someone will find me and take me home and teach me what life really is like. Outside of this numbness that I feel all the time. To love life instead of hoping it値l end and that I値l never have to live another day wanting to pass on to the next life, to be free of this body and to see the beauty if this planet I live on call earth to actually see colour like these so call greens, blues, reds and purples plus all the others I致e only dreamed of. How I wish I could see you, touch you, feel you. To hold you in my arms but until you rescue me from this box. I知 lost
Copyright ﾂｩ
Athenus
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2007-08-03 04:33:09]
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Re: The Black Box
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by brew on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 12:25:08 PM AEST
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How can you feel like this, what happened????????What a cold feeling when reading this write, and Im sad.! :( I can imagine not having what you really want, yet, it can not be that bad..or can it? Come on.....get out of that dark box.make the clouds go away and the rain subside...............*sighs*
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Re: The Black Box
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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Very sad but good writing.
Happiness comes from within.
I agree, get out of that box. Write your way out of it. I'm sure you know that writing is very healing to the soul.
huggs, much prayer,
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