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Lucid dream(just watching it flow)

Contributed by zenith66 on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 04:43:12 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy





Just a dream, noiseless wind encircling me,
And clouds of golden fingers stretch and further still,
No voices up here, they are not needed,
Just echoes , at the apex, of cooling water purer than the soul,
Dropping from beneath these clouds, Earth will soon be touched…

I have awoken…and further still I see through open eyes
There rises from the sea through breaking cloud,
An island? No just grass, and a single bowing tree,
And I think… I am there!!!… so I am…
Rolling from its leafy canopy, as water now, a journey of no significance? No more!

From my mind they swim anew, these spectacular images profound, captivated!!!
Now I embrace the scene from some far place. A cliff, sweeping from sea to sky,
Crimson sea shimmering as I know it should, vivid lands, saturate my vision, tell me this is not real,!!!
For that song that flocking birds do sing , birds of white on silent wing…

I have not heard its tune before




Copyright © zenith66 ... [ 2007-08-01 16:43:12]
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Re: Lucid dream(just watching it flow) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:27:13 AM AEST
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Damn .. I want to jump HEAD FIRST into this piece!
It is drenched in the most amazingly gorgeous images!!
By the end, I wanted to scream, it is real! it is real!!!
Because if it's not real, how on earth shall I ever find this
magical place?

Damn fine job! It seemed to bleed colour, beauty and peace,
pooling at the end with a shimmering reflection ... my God!
This was fantastic!

GREAT post, my friend. Truly fabulous!

~Breezy


Re: Lucid dream(just watching it flow) (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:07:24 PM AEST
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Oh my god, I loved this....what an escape. Beautiful thoughts and images came pouring in my mindscape. Wow. Wonderful, wonderful to read this.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura


Re: Lucid dream(just watching it flow) (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:05:58 AM AEST
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I must have read the opening stanza, itself, like 100 times. What a beautiful piece. I truly enjoy your work and can't wait for your next write. Thanks for your comments and support! Peace OUT, friend :)

~Adreana




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