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Just good-bye
I’m left alone
To wonder why
I ask… I plead…
I get no response
I miss you…
Do you notice…?
Do you care…?
Give me closure
Give me peace
Give me something to hold onto…
When will this end?
This pain…
Not soon enough…
Please come back to me
I need someone to love…
I need you…




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Do you care...?

Contributed by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 12:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



No real reasons…
Just good-bye
I’m left alone
To wonder why
I ask… I plead…
I get no response
I miss you…
Do you notice…?
Do you care…?
Give me closure
Give me peace
Give me something to hold onto…
When will this end?
This pain…
Not soon enough…
Please come back to me
I need someone to love…
I need you…








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Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLostPuppet on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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I can feel the sadness in it..
Good job. Keep it up.
TheLostPuppet


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by SoftHeartedAB on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:31:26 AM AEST
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I feel the true sadness inside this, nice job, i love the struggle of wanting to feel the love that layes within a persons heart.


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:52:52 AM AEST
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Oh dear holder .. there is pain on top of pain here.
This is dark emotion .. truly dark. The shortness of your lines
emphasize the desperation of the voice. It is unbearably sad.
Like tears that cannot dry.

There is a hell within this that scares me. Mostly, because
I have known this emotion .. it has been my unwelcome guest
a time or two. I'm sorry that it has invaded your space, my
friend.

~Breezy
(hoping for brighter days for you ..)


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 02:03:25 AM AEST
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A terrible, terrible thing to do to someone...no explinations. The unfinished incompleteness of it all is brought out by the shortness of your lines.
Great pain here. I hope you can move on...keep writing it out.


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 03:01:21 AM AEST
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Very powerful and sad in such a short writing... Sorry for the person that did this to you. You deserve so much better!!!


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by OneLastTime on Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 01:34:30 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem..it's really emotional!


Re: Do you care...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 05:54:08 PM AEST
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now you know how i feel....




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