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It flourished into a real beauty

I was the happiest girl alive

You made my heart stop

You were my fresh air in the morning

Your daily morning kisses made my cheeks glow

The smell of your after shave made my heart flutters

We strolled down the street hand in hand

My face lighted up with a broad divine smile

I laughed endlessly at your joke

We shared a double scoop chocolate ice cream

We talked how fate brought us together

I was on cloud 9 when your fingers ran through my hair

Every word you said I kept them in my heart

I felt secure and full of warmness when you hold me

For once I felt that I belong

I cherished the chats we had while watching the sun sets

I was glowing, I found happiness, and I was in love

But you changed it

I felt bitter, I cried, I felt numb and

Worst of all I no longer have the strength to love again

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I gave you my heart

Contributed by syenn0512 on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 12:40:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I gave you my heart

It flourished into a real beauty

I was the happiest girl alive

You made my heart stop

You were my fresh air in the morning

Your daily morning kisses made my cheeks glow

The smell of your after shave made my heart flutters

We strolled down the street hand in hand

My face lighted up with a broad divine smile

I laughed endlessly at your joke

We shared a double scoop chocolate ice cream

We talked how fate brought us together

I was on cloud 9 when your fingers ran through my hair

Every word you said I kept them in my heart

I felt secure and full of warmness when you hold me

For once I felt that I belong

I cherished the chats we had while watching the sun sets

I was glowing, I found happiness, and I was in love

But you changed it

I felt bitter, I cried, I felt numb and

Worst of all I no longer have the strength to love again

Copyright © syenn0512 ... [ 2007-07-31 00:40:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 02:57:23 AM AEST
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this is a very sad well expressed poem.. however don't give up on love because everything happens for a reason.. you will know later on why this didn't work out. I can relate to this in my past but i've moved forward.. keep the hope and don't let this drag you down.. beautifully sad write though.. hang in there, things get better

rock on,
vampyress Jenni

Re: I gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by anangel_1593 on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 03:26:14 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this quite a bit
I think many will find it easy to imagine the settings and the classic scenario. To love and lose is common, but to lose and rise again and where the true power lies. Keep on keeping on, and mostly, KEEP ON WRITING!
good job
Lotsa love
*ana*

Re: I gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by CoalMinersWife on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 09:01:45 AM AEST
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Aww very sad but dont give up on love as of yet.
Don't go looking fer love Better yet Let love find you..... Sad but nicely written

Re: I gave you my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 10:05:21 AM AEST
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Why so sad..... but I do understand....
This is a good write....keep those words flowing....

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