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Array ( [sid] => 136274 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When the Sun Falls [time] => 2007-07-27 20:12:17 [hometext] => Written for a friend, got the title from her my space comment. Sue x [bodytext] =>

When the sun falls upon this day

The demons creep out from their graves

Dark angels haunt your very soul

And ghastly gloom doth take its toll

The sun is shrouded by devils cloak

The words of demons with gothic note

An angel with wings of scaring dread

Proclaim to all real life is dead

The waning moon disappears from sight

The werewolf cries at dead of night

The entity it wakes from its sleep

Its journey long, its thoughts so deep

And so the sun falls and we prepare for doom

The air is cold as the the demon looms

The Angel of death she takes her place

The utter end of all human race

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When the Sun Falls

Contributed by jerseysue on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 08:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

When the sun falls upon this day

The demons creep out from their graves

Dark angels haunt your very soul

And ghastly gloom doth take its toll

The sun is shrouded by devils cloak

The words of demons with gothic note

An angel with wings of scaring dread

Proclaim to all real life is dead

The waning moon disappears from sight

The werewolf cries at dead of night

The entity it wakes from its sleep

Its journey long, its thoughts so deep

And so the sun falls and we prepare for doom

The air is cold as the the demon looms

The Angel of death she takes her place

The utter end of all human race

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2007-07-27 20:12:17]
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Re: When the Sun Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 10:12:25 PM AEST
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short but very powerful.. a great idea from a comment you have gotten.. I really liked this poem.. very creative and well penned out.. nice flow to it also.. great job

Rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: When the Sun Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:48:38 AM AEST
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Wow! Ya seem to have taken your poetic abilities to a higher level, Suexx. I agree with Jenni, this is powerful!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: When the Sun Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 05:11:30 AM AEST
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Powerful indeed, and darkly menacing.
The imagery is potent and chilling to the soul.

Great write!
Dom

Re: When the Sun Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 09:23:30 AM AEST
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Hey you, where you been hiding?Not that I can talk, lol. I have missed you so my dear friend.
Wow, I got to hand it to ya~ you did a mighty fine job with this write Sue. Different from your usual writes, but hey I absolutely love it girl. So good to see a new post from you.
Hoping to see more of you and your wonderful poetry here at YPDC.
*much love n hugs*
sue m

Re: When the Sun Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 12:54:34 AM AEST
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wicked excellent! hugs n' love nessa

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