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(Dont say you) Love Me

Contributed by keilantra on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 06:25:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



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Would you blame me if I told you I was scared?
My speechlessness should make it
obvious.

I never thought you were beautiful
until I saw you written out on paper,
the very epitome of eloquent and inspired,
exposed in a scribble here and a flourish there
(and it made me jealous).

You took that away from me.

Now you write clichéd songs and beginner’s poetry
instead of lengthy prose in that articulate way that I know you wished you talked in

and I so want to tell you to give it up

but they’re all about me so what kind of person would that make me?
and plus they make me smile
even though I figure that only half of it is true.
I’ve learned that most things are often too good to be real,
so yeah I guess you could say I’m hesitant.

So imagine my indecision when you sang me that song,
and begged me for the thing that I was most unable to give.
Does it make me a liar that I agreed, or does it just make a thief?
Because you give and give and give and all I can do is offer you tiniest bit of my heart
in my outstretched hand.




Copyright © keilantra ... [ 2007-07-22 06:25:49]
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Re: (Dont say you) Love Me (User Rating: 1 )
by physcoquack on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 07:09:12 AM AEST
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written with honesty in feelings of love and distrust good write


Re: (Dont say you) Love Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 09:47:31 AM AEST
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Kei, you always write with such gracefulness and an exacted emotion
that steals one's breath. I am so absorbed inside this that I hardly have words
to express my admiration. I am humbled ...

let me just say ...

I understand. SO damn well!

This was so expression-filled. A masterful piece, Kei.

~Breezy


Re: (Dont say you) Love Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 02:30:00 PM AEST
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painfully heartfelt honest.... beautifully written...

hugs n' love nessa

roses




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