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The Ring
Contributed by
LanBanan88
on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 09:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The saying goes:
A ring is round, it has no end
And thats how long, you'll be my friend
I love that saying because it seems so real
For a friend to say that to you
and in a way reveal
That lovely friendship that the 2 have got
just to remind each other that they mean a lot
But think about it-
the world is round
and it has no end
so why cant everyone
all be friends?
When people have enemies
-people they hate
they chip the rings friendship
something too good to take
When the ring is broken
it will have an end
The world would terminate
just because of that
unwanted friend.
Lana
Copyright ©
LanBanan88
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2007-07-21 21:54:53]
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Re: The Ring
(User Rating: 1 )
by physcoquack on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:48:59 AM AEST
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| good thinking and you convey your feelings well if just half the world thought the same way as you |
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