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Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 01:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stay in the willows
along this hidden path,
lavender colors
grace a morning walk.
Welcome the breeze
with it`s purity, and scents
remember a time,
you dreamed every moment.
Along a lake`s edge
holding on gentle,
like leaves clinging to the vine
the moments when our dreams whispered softly,
hearts spilling towards the edge.
I`ll take your hand
when the Sun is finished
the night is gentle
taking days place..
We can dream our dreams,
wish for sweet moment,
candy coating soft whispers
beneath whiskey skies....and wake to dream again.
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-07-21 13:57:55]
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Re: Stay
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:33:25 PM AEST
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Thanks my friend for inviting me along on this. It turned out beautiful and I love the pic. I just shot you a message but I guess you must have gone to sleep. Carrie called me back and I had to tell her, geezzzzz..... and I had to get out of room makin to much noise.....
This turned out beautiful!! I will talk to you tomorrow...
love ya
Michelle |
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Re: Stay
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 10:11:19 PM AEST
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beautifully done guys
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Re: Stay
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 01:45:28 AM AEST
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Beautifully done you guys.
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Re: Stay
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by richcol7522 on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 01:50:13 AM AEST
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| You guys did a beautiful job with this. and the pic fits...Great job |
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Re: Stay
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by Crow on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 01:51:45 AM AEST
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your light and thoughts are always welcome in these writes, I have so much fun with them.
thank you! my friend. Vincent |
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Re: Stay
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by physcoquack on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:41:45 AM AEST
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| good job you took in what one feels well out in the early morning |
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Re: Stay
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 11:41:04 AM AEST
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Vincent .. Michelle ... you two always have the most beautiful words to meld together.
The picture is gorgeous and the words are so picturesque, you know?
I adore this. It is exceptionally expressed. When you two get together, a loveliness
is born. so soft and delicate ....
perfectly beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Stay
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 11:51:06 AM AEST
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so lovely the picture, so beautiful the collaboration!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Stay
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 03:27:36 PM AEST
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wow
this is so smoothly flowing,
good stuff
well done..... |
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