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Array ( [sid] => 136092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I swear it was like that [time] => 2007-07-20 09:11:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I swear,
it was more like when i first kissed u and i dived right then into your soul
very young at heart, but from the outer layer of my skin, very old
feeling ones hands slip deeply into the arch of my back, caressin the lower bone that connects to the width of my hips and as one leaf that falls from a strong branch of its tree, with so much strenght from the roots in the ground is how i felt myself fallin' in love with u
i swear it was like a diease in the brain causin everything to shut down
a lack of a screw givin me a virus but something sweet
a half of you
one, one thousand
two,one thousand
three, one thousand raindrops pressin and kissin my face
in me you have found your place
i swear its was like a virgin for the first time being blank
minded and confused how to get on top of the saddle and whine
my body begins to lock up easily
damn, i swear just from that moment of looking at you, i felt as if you were apart of me
so come close to me
fallin into your soul is what i am about to do
so pull me close to you
so it can be like i swear it could be
like that [comments] => 0 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => seci [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I swear it was like that

Contributed by seci on Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 09:11:37 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I swear,
it was more like when i first kissed u and i dived right then into your soul
very young at heart, but from the outer layer of my skin, very old
feeling ones hands slip deeply into the arch of my back, caressin the lower bone that connects to the width of my hips and as one leaf that falls from a strong branch of its tree, with so much strenght from the roots in the ground is how i felt myself fallin' in love with u
i swear it was like a diease in the brain causin everything to shut down
a lack of a screw givin me a virus but something sweet
a half of you
one, one thousand
two,one thousand
three, one thousand raindrops pressin and kissin my face
in me you have found your place
i swear its was like a virgin for the first time being blank
minded and confused how to get on top of the saddle and whine
my body begins to lock up easily
damn, i swear just from that moment of looking at you, i felt as if you were apart of me
so come close to me
fallin into your soul is what i am about to do
so pull me close to you
so it can be like i swear it could be
like that




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