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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Turn Around
[time] => 2007-07-19 19:12:37
[hometext] => Dedicated to my parents who basically saved my life....
[bodytext] => ((** ok well this has a background story to it...i was at a very low stage of my life where i thought that i didnt have a future, because of acedemic results...i even contemplated suicide...but after running up a huge bill trying to talk to people. i decided to talk to my parents about it...and they were the biggest help ever...this is basically to them.....please comment and tell me what category this should go in..im not too certain with inspiration..i dunno...and any suggestions for the title, or is it ok? thanks! Lana xo **)) They say for me to close my eyes so I can feel the peace within But even that i have tried And i still dont feel anything I breathe in deeply just as im told As i count from one to ten And as im doing so it fails Because my pain just begins again I try to not think about it but it all seems to come back There i see myself standing alone on my extremly lost track I cannot seem to focus I cannot seem to think I keep bringing myself donw most of the times without even knowing it The picture keeps appearing im such a failure All rugged up and poor Ive lost all my friends and family thers no one left to adore But then suddenly i see the light and i dont no what to do i saw a beautiful figure come out of it the day i talked to you You bent down to lend your hand i grabbed it without a second thought the love and understanding that was expressed can never ever be bought Im so lucky, so grateful to have parents like you that i rarely do appreciate you rarely dish out rules for us to follow instead you cooperate That day we talked i realised that i finally got it right that you were my miracle, my angel from that shining light I now close my eyes i feel the peace within then i get a surprise i see a future so beautiful, ive never seen. Lana [comments] => 1 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 19 [informant] => LanBanan88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
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