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Array ( [sid] => 136074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben [time] => 2007-07-19 08:28:57 [hometext] => You and i more than merely seized a moment, we forever gave it a place of residency, in that place known as our hearts. [bodytext] =>

Once upon a moment

i kissed you for an hour

your beauty never left my mind

alone,

as pretty as a picture as fragile as a flower

as rare as the rosetta

stone.

Once upon a moment

you said hello to me looking from the corner

of your eye, what was i to say as you took my breath away

your voice was like a babie's

lullaby.

Once upon a passion

we touched each others soul

and made a solem promise

together we'd grow

old,

that every star we wished upon

would be a wish come true

for loving you has gone beyond what even dreams

can do.

Yes

once upon moment

love caught me by surprise

before i knew what happened

you were looking in my eyes,

'twas in that very moment

i knew what was to

come

'tis now a life time later still i love you

and then

some.

Ben [comments] => 6 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 2 [informant] => myheartsvoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 08:28:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Once upon a moment

i kissed you for an hour

your beauty never left my mind

alone,

as pretty as a picture as fragile as a flower

as rare as the rosetta

stone.

Once upon a moment

you said hello to me looking from the corner

of your eye, what was i to say as you took my breath away

your voice was like a babie's

lullaby.

Once upon a passion

we touched each others soul

and made a solem promise

together we'd grow

old,

that every star we wished upon

would be a wish come true

for loving you has gone beyond what even dreams

can do.

Yes

once upon moment

love caught me by surprise

before i knew what happened

you were looking in my eyes,

'twas in that very moment

i knew what was to

come

'tis now a life time later still i love you

and then

some.

Ben

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-07-19 08:28:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 09:07:37 AM AEST
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I love this...

"Once upon a moment
i kissed you for an hour"~you

These are the kind of kisses that explore the soul...

Simply wondrous!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~mecavegirl...ugh
*wink*

Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:41:59 PM AEST
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your love for her shines here, and i love the and then some adds a big hug to the poem:)

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 06:44:44 PM AEST
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I love all the comparisons in this, to the Rosetta stone and to a flower, just enhancing the strength and appreciation in your love.

And that ending, I can see it being said with a cheeky yet endearing smile. Certainly made me smile, to know that all can be given, but this does not mean that there is nothing left to give.

Lovely!
Dom

Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 04:42:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful...as always, my brother. Your love is a light that never stops shining.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace, love and hugs,
Hippie Sis

Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 04:16:29 PM AEST
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Now, that's a love poem. A beautiful poem. "Once Upon A Moment..." And the reader knows that, that moment lasted a lifetime.

J~

Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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Ben I never ever tire from reading your wonderful romantic poetry my dear friend. Always so beautiful, uplifting & inspiring. Each word penned so beautifully you melt the readers heart and for this reader you give hope that "true love" really does exist.
Lovely and heart warming. Thanks for sharing it with us.
many hugs ur fan/friend,
dreamer

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