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Array ( [sid] => 136065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I See Is Me [time] => 2007-07-19 01:40:35 [hometext] => This is a wierd one, but one of my best, i feel. [bodytext] => D'ya think im pretty?
All i see is me
Floating in a sea of nothingness
Co-existing in a vast lonely,world
Some people say i look like my mum
Maybe they're right
Some people say i have a pretty face
Maybe they're not

Who knows
Who cares
All i see is me

Another day, another dollar
They say
Is it all worth it?
What are we doing?

All striving to survive
Co-existing together
Our lives intertwined

Who knows
How many lives we have touched
Spoiled, damaged

As long as we survive
Nobody cares
Our race must exist
For life
As we know it
To carry on
But is it all worth it?
All i see is me

Birth
Growth
Life
Why?

What put us on this earth
Must have a reason for these games
What must that reason be?
Do we live to survive?
Or survive to live?
Is our purpose
Just to survive?

I cannot believe it is so

D'ya think i'm pretty?
Who cares

All i see is me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 73 [informant] => LoneWolf25 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

All I See Is Me

Contributed by LoneWolf25 on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:40:35 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

D'ya think im pretty?
All i see is me
Floating in a sea of nothingness
Co-existing in a vast lonely,world
Some people say i look like my mum
Maybe they're right
Some people say i have a pretty face
Maybe they're not

Who knows
Who cares
All i see is me

Another day, another dollar
They say
Is it all worth it?
What are we doing?

All striving to survive
Co-existing together
Our lives intertwined

Who knows
How many lives we have touched
Spoiled, damaged

As long as we survive
Nobody cares
Our race must exist
For life
As we know it
To carry on
But is it all worth it?
All i see is me

Birth
Growth
Life
Why?

What put us on this earth
Must have a reason for these games
What must that reason be?
Do we live to survive?
Or survive to live?
Is our purpose
Just to survive?

I cannot believe it is so

D'ya think i'm pretty?
Who cares

All i see is me.

Copyright © LoneWolf25 ... [ 2007-07-19 01:40:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: All I See Is Me (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:44:31 AM AEST
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Inner beauty is WHAT you need to see.....Outer is the shallowness which everyone dwells on.pfft to them . If you beleive your pretty then you are. Like this write, I have to agree I dont care what ppl think of me.Im me, and thats all there is to it.

Brew~

Re: All I See Is Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:50:53 AM AEST
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All you NEED to see is you. If you know yourself, life becomes a personal journey. And only you can decide what your purpose is. Do you want it only to be about survival? If not, then don't live it that way. Live to experience all you can, good and bad.... because life is a roller coaster with ups and downs and twist and turns. And you never know what it's going to present to you next. Roll with the games... PLAY THE GAME. Triumph over the "reasons". Who cares. All you need is you.

Re: All I See Is Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:29:16 AM AEST
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All I see is ME. Is that not rather egoistic? Look at the world around you there is so much to see and do. Help is needed at every turn in one's life. You either give it or get it given to you. Please open your eyes to the outside and your poetry will improve a hundred percent. Friendly greetings from bern.

Re: All I See Is Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 03:02:38 AM AEST
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Belive what you want in life.
if you believe you are pretty.
then dont let noone else tell you different.
beauty is in the eye of the holder ...
beauty is only skin deep.

its good to know you think you are pretty.
because i dont. good write...

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