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Touch .... gentle in your hash nature


Passion ...cold in your touch but smooth on my flesh

You call my name in the dark you caress me to wake
you hold me with gentle wet kisses longing for the night not to end
then in your arms we make love and i hear the oceans calm for that time

Turmoil .....the hidden mistress with bouts of hidden rage


Longing ....of the family you crave with hidden lust


Confusion ...of the love that is shown and the meaning inside

you push me away with fits of spite in the dark
our passion to much to hold
you walk away with no ring for your love hidden meaning with every breath

i whisper to you and call your name in the dark
you touch me with wet eyes and sullen tongue
we make love again as passion flares
and we sleep
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Burnt Embers Of Lust

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:05:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Whispers ........so soft soothing every inch to calm

Touch .... gentle in your hash nature


Passion ...cold in your touch but smooth on my flesh

You call my name in the dark you caress me to wake
you hold me with gentle wet kisses longing for the night not to end
then in your arms we make love and i hear the oceans calm for that time

Turmoil .....the hidden mistress with bouts of hidden rage


Longing ....of the family you crave with hidden lust


Confusion ...of the love that is shown and the meaning inside

you push me away with fits of spite in the dark
our passion to much to hold
you walk away with no ring for your love hidden meaning with every breath

i whisper to you and call your name in the dark
you touch me with wet eyes and sullen tongue
we make love again as passion flares
and we sleep




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2007-07-18 11:05:38]
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Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:37:09 AM AEST
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Wow Relic,
Holy crap...this is incredibly beautiful...with tones of sadness woven in. That last stanza is simply incredible. Wow again.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura


Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:19:34 PM AEST
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hemmmm is it me or is it gettin hot in here?

it gettin hot in here

I loved this

Michelle


Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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wow very intense and indepth.. great job on this.. its just amazingly written..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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aww so romantic and lovely :)
very nicely done




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