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Array ( [sid] => 136037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Road hog [time] => 2007-07-18 00:31:26 [hometext] => I got the idea for this poem when I was watching a TV show yesterday. [bodytext] => Because of a road hog, my son is dead.
He was only fifteen and now he has no more years ahead.
I was trying to drive my dying son to the hospital on that horrible day.
A man in front of me in an Oldsmobile wouldn't get out of the way.
I honked my horn time after time but he wouldn't let me pass.
I just saw his car at a diner and I'm going to kick his ***.
The doctors said if I had gotten my son there sooner, he wouldn't have died.
I'm going to go in this diner and invite that piece of trash outside.
He'll be in a wheelchair when I'm done.
He should be dead instead of my son. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Road hog

Contributed by randyjohnson on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Because of a road hog, my son is dead.
He was only fifteen and now he has no more years ahead.
I was trying to drive my dying son to the hospital on that horrible day.
A man in front of me in an Oldsmobile wouldn't get out of the way.
I honked my horn time after time but he wouldn't let me pass.
I just saw his car at a diner and I'm going to kick his ***.
The doctors said if I had gotten my son there sooner, he wouldn't have died.
I'm going to go in this diner and invite that piece of trash outside.
He'll be in a wheelchair when I'm done.
He should be dead instead of my son.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2007-07-18 00:31:26]
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Re: Road hog (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 01:12:02 AM AEST
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hi...i understand yr feelings..no words can ever xpress the pain u feel

Re: Road hog (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 07:59:09 AM AEST
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DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's hella deep *****! I'm truly sorry for your loss you have a gift through your poetry use it to keep your sons memories alive!!! I am curious though did the oldmobile ass**** get hiss A** kicked???
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