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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => To be your love! - Second Edition
[time] => 2007-07-17 19:10:56
[hometext] => Re-written because of a few certain helpful suggestions, also i thought there needed to be more said!
[bodytext] => Within my eyes your image does stray, Your eyes light up with a caress of pleasure, Your face, your smile, offers the way, It used to be something I wished to last forever. But you crossed that invisable line in the sand, Dismembered everything i thought was a given, Therefore broke everything we had made, everything planned, Pulled my petals off expecting me to just remain there like a good little kitten. Cannot, willnot, to allow would be stupid, I was brought up with the fight of thousand warriors within my veins, Can't sit here unemotional anymore, can't be lucid, To allow you to overbear me, what was i thinking, going insain. Everything is deminished, broken, dismembered, I shall move on now, close my eyes to this, open them on tomorrow, I will admit your still a close friend that will always be remembered, But still to be your love used to mean forever, but no more, no sorrow. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 52 [informant] => jackson21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
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