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Array ( [sid] => 136009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~ Damaged ~ [time] => 2007-07-16 20:26:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Beneath all that pressure lays a truth that must be silenced.
No one is to know how the cups got broken,
or how they got mended.
You can glue together anything
If the blood is sticky enough.

Revelations are so overrated in a world
That breeds irregularities.
Where everybody always wants to know “why”
But there are no reasons for reasons unknown.
Wounds just get inflicted and they fester.

I bled too much to undo my damage
You can hold on to what you want
I’ll pick up the pieces you leave behind
My cups are all smashed up now
Can I have some of yours?
I promise that the blood won’t look too bad
on your fine white china.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Davinah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

~ Damaged ~

Contributed by Davinah on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 08:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Beneath all that pressure lays a truth that must be silenced.
No one is to know how the cups got broken,
or how they got mended.
You can glue together anything
If the blood is sticky enough.

Revelations are so overrated in a world
That breeds irregularities.
Where everybody always wants to know “why”
But there are no reasons for reasons unknown.
Wounds just get inflicted and they fester.

I bled too much to undo my damage
You can hold on to what you want
I’ll pick up the pieces you leave behind
My cups are all smashed up now
Can I have some of yours?
I promise that the blood won’t look too bad
on your fine white china.

Copyright Â© Davinah ... [ 2007-07-16 20:26:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~ Damaged ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 01:53:21 AM AEST
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hmm what an interesting write
well done

Re: ~ Damaged ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:00:45 AM AEST
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this is very inetersting and powerful. it seems as though it can relate to different things and in life.. metophorically.. great job here

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~ Damaged ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 02:47:22 AM AEST
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Hmmm... I was reeading through the writes today and this one stood out. Very symbolic and there is much strength in this write. Good job on this one. Keep up the good work. :)

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