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A Kiss
Contributed by
Lone_er
on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 05:00:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I place a poetic kiss upon your lips
Send it with you to the sea
With a wish upon my own
“Bring it back to me”
“Return it to me”
“With all its warmth and tenderness”
“Let me feel its love”
It’s warm and sweet caress
“Let me imagine the moments”
“You whispered my name to the sea”
“Your heart remembered the kiss”
“Thought of me”
“ Let me savor the salty brine”
“ Upon your wind kissed lips my dove”
“ As you were thinking of these words”
“ Amid moonlit reflections of my love”
Tarry not sweet kiss!
Oh bring her back you see!
For only my angels lips
Can grant this wish for me!
Russ
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2007-07-16 05:00:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 05:22:50 AM AEST (User
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russ! this is sooo beautiful ! romantic journey of the kiss, and the sea, what a fabulous combo! excellent writing!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluestars on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:48:31 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem!
When i read it for that second i was there in this beautiful world wow very breath taking
Love it
Best wishes
~Bluestars~ |
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:28:40 AM AEST (User
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terribly beautiful and so exceedingly filled with a longing that is as deep and wide as
the sea herself. Not to mention, both beautiful and dangerous. Wow. I can't
imagine anything more romantic or more powerful than a kiss sent out across the
bluest sea in hope of it returning .... *siiiiiiiiigh*
Damn lovely, write. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST (User
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I agree with everyone here this write is so beautiful and romantic.
Let me savor the salty brine”
“ Upon your wind kissed lips my dove”
“ As you were thinking of these words”
“ Amid moonlit reflections of my love
just love those lines :) |
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Re: A Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:10:57 AM AEST (User
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this is a very beatiful passionate write.. awesome job here!! marvelous!!
rock on,
vampyressJenni |
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