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the whisper

Contributed by Tot on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:03:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



the whisper
I felt upon my ear
a tragic silence
flowed beneath

whisper to me my love
so softly into the night
no distance shall block the sound
of what I want to hear

whisper my darling
allow me to believe again
that what was lost into the past
is not forgotten

whisper, oh whisper
so softly~
I feel your whisper across my soul
into the depths of my body

whisper into the firey passion
blanket my heart with lovely destrtuction
we shall think of this no more
and do what our hearts desire

for the whispers of love enveloped by your embrace
deliver me to the heart's most inebriated destiny

when I close my eyes
you are here beside me
not lost into the past where I denied this
so whisper to me my love
just the one last time
and I will forge beyond the flooded tear stained reality
where you lie in wait
and I will deliver my soul to an insult
where my mind deserves to be
and the hearts most painful tragedy shall remain forever
here as my everything....dies









Copyright © Tot ... [ 2007-07-16 02:03:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: the whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:38:48 AM AEST
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very nicely done


Re: the whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:24:50 AM AEST
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*jumps up and down hysterically*

*a new one! a new one! a new one!*

*attempts to compose self*

ahem!

A whisper .. oh yes inDEED, dear Kandice. Wow. A whisper so LOUD it's
deafening! This is so completely passionate and beautiful. That is ... right
up to the ending. How wickedly desperate and sad that last word is. But oh
how perfect to the piece itself!! Love ... passion ... the beauty and tragedy of it all.
It's all too overwhelming at times, no? I adore this one. It's my new favourite
of yours. :)

Lovely. Just so damn painfully lovely.

~Roxanne


Re: the whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST
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Lovely write


Re: the whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 02:56:09 AM AEST
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My friend this a beautiful love poem that I had read in resent times.
Wonderful write.
FRANCO.


Re: the whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:13:25 AM AEST
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wow this is breathtakingly passionate, lovely and sad.. this is just a fabulous write!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni




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