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Array ( [sid] => 135975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love in Translation! [time] => 2007-07-15 04:16:42 [hometext] => My sequal to "Confessions" I love you Yana! Happybirthday! [bodytext] => You had me a Note.
A napkin, really!
With gibberish scratched all over...
The camp hall in crowded,
and the heat outside nearly melted our bones.
That's why I thought you face was red...

Your new to the country.
So the customs are new too.
The language,
The food,
the clothes,

...

The romance.

You have a slow smile,
easy and cool.
But it fits with your laughing character,
since you smile all the time!

Your face is a new kind of beauty.
Hazel eyes.
Olive skin,
and onyx black hair.

You tell me to translate the Note,
when we're all back home,
away from camp.
Then call you.

Your really are the coolest guy I've ever met!
Like a bird, ready to fly.
To sing and laugh.
Free and easy,
and funny to!!

I look up a site,
that can tells me your hidden message;

我爱你

imagine my suprise
when the fantasy of my heart,
appears on the screen!!

I call you and we talk.
and talk.
and talk.
About everything and nothing!
and it wasn't until the end,

that it clicks.

and I have only one thing to say,

我爱你也是。

You laugh.
I laugh.

And you promise to call again.

20 minutes later,
the phone rings.

Hahaha.

I can't wait to see you again.
And all of a sudden,
the world seems smaller.
Every time you call.
and every time I call.

And it seems like you here with me.

Your birthday is coming up.
I really have no idea what to do!

...

Hong Kong's not THAT far away, is it?

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Love in Translation!

Contributed by untitled on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 04:16:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You had me a Note.
A napkin, really!
With gibberish scratched all over...
The camp hall in crowded,
and the heat outside nearly melted our bones.
That's why I thought you face was red...

Your new to the country.
So the customs are new too.
The language,
The food,
the clothes,

...

The romance.

You have a slow smile,
easy and cool.
But it fits with your laughing character,
since you smile all the time!

Your face is a new kind of beauty.
Hazel eyes.
Olive skin,
and onyx black hair.

You tell me to translate the Note,
when we're all back home,
away from camp.
Then call you.

Your really are the coolest guy I've ever met!
Like a bird, ready to fly.
To sing and laugh.
Free and easy,
and funny to!!

I look up a site,
that can tells me your hidden message;

我爱你

imagine my suprise
when the fantasy of my heart,
appears on the screen!!

I call you and we talk.
and talk.
and talk.
About everything and nothing!
and it wasn't until the end,

that it clicks.

and I have only one thing to say,

我爱你也是。

You laugh.
I laugh.

And you promise to call again.

20 minutes later,
the phone rings.

Hahaha.

I can't wait to see you again.
And all of a sudden,
the world seems smaller.
Every time you call.
and every time I call.

And it seems like you here with me.

Your birthday is coming up.
I really have no idea what to do!

...

Hong Kong's not THAT far away, is it?

Copyright © untitled ... [ 2007-07-15 04:16:42]
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Re: Love in Translation! (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:56:37 PM AEST
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I couldn't help but smile when I read this...especially when I read the last line. You sound head over heels in love....very sweet write.
Thanks for sharing....it was just like finding and reading someone's lovenote. Very cool.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Love in Translation! (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:04:38 PM AEST
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is such a sweet write...thanks for sharing..

Hong Kong is not that far from my the place i stayed..abt 4 hours flight...and is a very,very beautiful country...

wish you all well with your love...:)

Re: Love in Translation! (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 02:06:22 PM AEST
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Awww cute write i am sure hong kong is not that far. :)
Some day i like to go there too with my kids.
Thanks for sharing

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