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Array ( [sid] => 135961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Between Friends [time] => 2007-07-14 12:52:53 [hometext] => a softer write [bodytext] => When you are strong
and the world has you back
I will remember the tears between hearts.

I will remember the shadows
walks along shores
blistering truth We could afford.

We were illusive then...
Hidden in damages
learning hearts.

I was strong..
and held you..
it was nothing, as You set Us to wind....Vincent

[for you my friends]
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Between Friends

Contributed by crow on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:52:53 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

When you are strong
and the world has you back
I will remember the tears between hearts.

I will remember the shadows
walks along shores
blistering truth We could afford.

We were illusive then...
Hidden in damages
learning hearts.

I was strong..
and held you..
it was nothing, as You set Us to wind....Vincent

[for you my friends]

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-07-14 12:52:53]
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Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:57:21 PM AEST
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What a lovely write Lane....... and yes you have always been strong and held my hands... held me close and from a distance for that is the person that you are and for that I love you!

hugs
Michelle

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:59:19 PM AEST
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so very touching
Hugs

Shari

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 01:01:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Gentle and soft...as your heart and soul seem to be. When I run away from here....can I stop by? *smiles*

Much peace, love and hugs...
Laura

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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Yes very gentle and soft great write

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 05:11:58 PM AEST
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Excellent wtite

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Nates_JrAT on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 09:18:33 AM AEST
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This was very moving...lucky friends

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 11:18:21 AM AEST
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& here is the cherry on top...

It seems just about everything I've
read here today has a common thread
of appreciation, love & friendship...

I want to bottle it & share w/ the world!

Today has reached official, "feel good",
status for me & for that, I thank you!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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Wow Vincent. What a completely beautiful and altruistic write. Somehow it
tugs at the heartstrings like nothing before. It's too lovely, my friend.

I adore the third stanza, but the whole piece is magnificent. Writing
to be appreciated and adored. As is your friendship. One of a kind, you are.

gorgeous

~Breezy

Re: Between Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:48:58 AM AEST
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this is beautiful:) it touches all who may read it with gentleness, and the friend that you are to all of us here:)

hugs n' love nessa

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