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Dang, damn, slam, everything I am ,if I'm not the friend you wished for me to be,
Dang, damn, slam if you see me as I am, I can solve your problems and your mystery.
For life has circles come to bloom ,
I've taken time,Reserved the room.
To bring you through the pain.

Dang, damn, slam you can take me as I am, I quess I care to much.
Yet. Dang, damn, slam I've travelled through your soul and I feel it in the touch.
Your heart riped out and torn to pain, I have to ask you once again,
If dang, damn and slam can ease your pain?

It's hard to trust a soul, that is dang, damn and slammed.

But I beg for all your trust in just this minute.
As a heart can be infused so much with a slow and gentle thoughtful touch,
to change every beat and thought within it.

If you be dang, damn, slam then you are but what you am.
I praise the universe and all that's in it. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 14 [informant] => needledancing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Dang, Damn, Slam

Contributed by needledancing on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 11:51:30 AM in AEST
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Dang, damn, slam, everything I am ,if I'm not the friend you wished for me to be,
Dang, damn, slam if you see me as I am, I can solve your problems and your mystery.
For life has circles come to bloom ,
I've taken time,Reserved the room.
To bring you through the pain.

Dang, damn, slam you can take me as I am, I quess I care to much.
Yet. Dang, damn, slam I've travelled through your soul and I feel it in the touch.
Your heart riped out and torn to pain, I have to ask you once again,
If dang, damn and slam can ease your pain?

It's hard to trust a soul, that is dang, damn and slammed.

But I beg for all your trust in just this minute.
As a heart can be infused so much with a slow and gentle thoughtful touch,
to change every beat and thought within it.

If you be dang, damn, slam then you are but what you am.
I praise the universe and all that's in it.

Copyright © needledancing ... [ 2007-07-13 11:51:30]
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:30:26 PM AEST
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Good for you! We'll love 'em all 'til some o' 'dat lovin' seeps in the cracks!!!Dang, Damn, Slam dunk, I Love This!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~me

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:00:30 PM AEST
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this is awesome, love the dang damn slam and the pic lovely write

Michelle

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:16:56 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written, compassion and understanding that we can give one another can help overcome the pain we feel. May your heart continue to be filled with peace and joy.

sadaddy
Scott

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:38:47 PM AEST
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Lovely write

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 06:14:51 AM AEST
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Loved the words and the picture Dang, damn, slam think im going to start saying that lol xxx

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:57:03 AM AEST
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I read both this and questions there intence and fulled with a bit of stored up reserveations and passion, my friend, nicely expressed boldy revealed, and your heart and sould are showing again.

hugs

Ben

Re: Dang, Damn, Slam (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:18:24 AM AEST
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The dang damn slam puts a rhythm to this wonderful piece that us performing poets just love! And I love it! Bein' a cowboy poet who uses cacographic language for emphasis I really loved the line, "If you be dang, damn, slam then you are but what you am." Very nice work.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

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