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Array ( [sid] => 135930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love In the Waiting [time] => 2007-07-13 02:20:11 [hometext] => A love poem about the challenges of loving someone whose mind is elsewhere. [bodytext] => Love in the waiting


I wake up and stare out upon the sea

for it is another day and your not here with me

oh i can see you in all your splender

your smile is like the sunrise in early morn upon my eyes

your vioce is like heavenly music upon my ears

your laugh can raise my spirit, and make me soar

but you absence crushes my soul, and make me morn

I feel as if i can touch you but your just out of reach

I feel as if I can speak to you but waves deafen my speach

I feel as if you understand, but yet sea still calls and you must go

Oh how i dread the sea, and its demands

for my life is running short, and my time nears its end

how can i comfort you ,from the beyound

how will I get to tell you these word of mine, after i am gone

how will you feel my love, when my body is no more

I live today becuase i have today but tommorrow is unwritten

I love today for I have today and tommorrow may be forbidden

I am here today becuase God has permitted




By Alias Rabbit Passion
March 2007 (All rights Reserved)
No permission is given for reproduction or use of this work with author consent
For Consent Please Email
rabbitpassion@livejournal.com

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Love In the Waiting

Contributed by rabbitpassion on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:20:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Love in the waiting


I wake up and stare out upon the sea

for it is another day and your not here with me

oh i can see you in all your splender

your smile is like the sunrise in early morn upon my eyes

your vioce is like heavenly music upon my ears

your laugh can raise my spirit, and make me soar

but you absence crushes my soul, and make me morn

I feel as if i can touch you but your just out of reach

I feel as if I can speak to you but waves deafen my speach

I feel as if you understand, but yet sea still calls and you must go

Oh how i dread the sea, and its demands

for my life is running short, and my time nears its end

how can i comfort you ,from the beyound

how will I get to tell you these word of mine, after i am gone

how will you feel my love, when my body is no more

I live today becuase i have today but tommorrow is unwritten

I love today for I have today and tommorrow may be forbidden

I am here today becuase God has permitted




By Alias Rabbit Passion
March 2007 (All rights Reserved)
No permission is given for reproduction or use of this work with author consent
For Consent Please Email
rabbitpassion@livejournal.com





Copyright © rabbitpassion ... [ 2007-07-13 02:20:11]
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Re: Love In the Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:09:43 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful write,

I live today because I have today but tomorrow is unwritten...... what a strong line

our abscence crushes my soul but makes me mourn....... heartbreaking

Overall entire write sings.

Michelle


Re: Love In the Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by cutestmofo on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:18:13 AM AEST
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really really like it great write read mine we in the same bout lol




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