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[aid] => mick
[title] => Apart
[time] => 2007-07-12 21:58:26
[hometext] => Some that touch your life can leave a Hollow
[bodytext] => A notion that had lifted
heart and piece of the soul,
the crime had no beginning
held on to and end.
A meaningless breeze
rush past all good
buries itself in infractions
hurried on.
It had come to words
without sorrow,
the eager peace one seeks.
It had come to a sad thing
and left me apart..Vincent
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[ratings] => 5
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
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Apart
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 09:58:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A notion that had lifted
heart and piece of the soul,
the crime had no beginning
held on to and end.
A meaningless breeze
rush past all good
buries itself in infractions
hurried on.
It had come to words
without sorrow,
the eager peace one seeks.
It had come to a sad thing
and left me apart..Vincent
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Re: Apart
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 10:04:16 PM AEST
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some enrich our lives others leave us empty you describe this very well my friend
Shari |
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Re: Apart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 11:06:48 PM AEST
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Oh Vincent, this is incredibly heartbreaking, my friend.
It possesses a kind of torture that holds the heart captive
with no hope of escape. Your words cover the soul like rain
and leaves one feeling quite desperate and helpless ...
I think into each life there is meaning found from the acquaintance
of every being. Even in sorrow, there is a purpose, no?
(Don't want to take liberties in assuming this is how you are
feeling at the moment, but if this is an emotion that you
are akin to in the present, I am sorry for your pain, my friend.
Excellent piece. Funny how hurt and anguish can create
the most deeply affecting writes in us. Beautifully painful, Vincent.
~Breezy |
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Re: Apart
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 11:47:34 PM AEST
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| Heartbreaking but done so well |
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Re: Apart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:10:37 AM AEST
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wow this is really insightful and powerful.. great expression and i especially loved the last stanza.. marvelous
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Apart
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:27:12 AM AEST
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yep that is how life is
Some that touch your life can leave a Hollow
Ya most people makes me feel that.
great write |
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Re: Apart
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:48:42 AM AEST
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Such sadness fill my heart when I read this. My dear brother, where have you been? (thinks maybe I should call)
Brevity of words in this piece that screams out in silence. Beautiful...
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Apart
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:33:33 AM AEST
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((Lane))
what prompted this write? It is so sad..... it gathers around me with a sullen breeze. Do tell......
love you
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Apart
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by needledancing on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:58:40 PM AEST
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For pain is growth, that growth be strong.
If I grow bitter, then I grow wrong.
For what of love if not to chance?
The heart would never know the dance.
Dance lightlly and flow with your lifes music.
A painful and yet so enlightening an experience...No? |
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Re: Apart
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by Nates_JrAT on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:57:09 AM AEST
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| I agree that this is heartbreaking, but I love the way you write and the emotion is still beautiful. |
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Re: Apart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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like loosing a friend or a love, so sadly finito' and no turning back, or taking back the moment, i hope all is well with you my friend,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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