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Array ( [sid] => 135915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When [time] => 2007-07-12 13:10:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when you cant see your feet

and your stubbling through the dark

when your in pain and wish itll just stop

but really it has only begun to start

when you feel that the world is watching you

but youve got nothing to show

when the questions are there, threatning you till u answer

but the answers you do not know

when your pulling and pushing

but its not you that is moving

when you try to seek help

but noone, and nothing is found to be soothing

when you scream and cry

but your voice isnt heard

when you debate an important issue

and still they doubt your word

when you offer out a hand

only for it to be pushed away

when youve finally been noticed

but end up with nothing important to say

when your down and bleeding

only to be stared at, and laughed upon

when they say your a winner

and its a joke, coz thers nothing that could be won

when you think youll be ok

but the world is really craving in

when your torn and stripped to pieces

coz what uve lost is everything

when youve crawled 1000 miles on your own

only to find theres nothing there

when youve run into warming arms

to be pushed away coz they simply do not care

when the waves begin to swell

and ur going under

when the world comes crashing down

ur stuck in rain and thunder

I' ll be the hand of the ocean

that pulls you to the shore

I'll be the warming arms

youll be the one i'll adore

I'll be the heat of the cold evening

the arms thatll keep you warm

I'll be the missing pieces to you

the ones that have forever vanished - just gone

I'll be the one lending a hand

begging for yours too

just let me help you out

and dont ever forget that i love you.

Lana

11/5/07
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When

Contributed by LanBanan88 on Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

when you cant see your feet

and your stubbling through the dark

when your in pain and wish itll just stop

but really it has only begun to start

when you feel that the world is watching you

but youve got nothing to show

when the questions are there, threatning you till u answer

but the answers you do not know

when your pulling and pushing

but its not you that is moving

when you try to seek help

but noone, and nothing is found to be soothing

when you scream and cry

but your voice isnt heard

when you debate an important issue

and still they doubt your word

when you offer out a hand

only for it to be pushed away

when youve finally been noticed

but end up with nothing important to say

when your down and bleeding

only to be stared at, and laughed upon

when they say your a winner

and its a joke, coz thers nothing that could be won

when you think youll be ok

but the world is really craving in

when your torn and stripped to pieces

coz what uve lost is everything

when youve crawled 1000 miles on your own

only to find theres nothing there

when youve run into warming arms

to be pushed away coz they simply do not care

when the waves begin to swell

and ur going under

when the world comes crashing down

ur stuck in rain and thunder

I' ll be the hand of the ocean

that pulls you to the shore

I'll be the warming arms

youll be the one i'll adore

I'll be the heat of the cold evening

the arms thatll keep you warm

I'll be the missing pieces to you

the ones that have forever vanished - just gone

I'll be the one lending a hand

begging for yours too

just let me help you out

and dont ever forget that i love you.

Lana

11/5/07

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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:30:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC (a tad late), Lana. I do hope you enjoy your time here. I'd encourage you to spell out words instead of using, for example, "coz" and "ur". In general, readers here seem to prefer the former over the latter.

This is a heartwarming friendship poem. I hope that you shared it with whomever might have inspired it!

~Snemmy

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 01:06:48 PM AEST
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Well expessed and total appreciation in your words and great wisdom that When a friend is needed....hey you'll be there. Awesome....good piece.

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Thespia on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 07:04:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed, a lovely poem,
thank you for sharing

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