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Array ( [sid] => 135885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Romeo and Juliet [time] => 2007-07-11 11:09:36 [hometext] => it was very late at night and i had a few drinks critisisim welcome! [bodytext] => Rivals by name, lovers by heart,
The name in which they hold means power and wealth,
yet everything they want they cannot touch,
their souls intwined by love,

"But soft! What light through yonder window breaks? It is the East and Juliet is the sun!"
He so choose his sun, no nocturnal games shall he play,
The name in which he lays so powerful so strong,
" What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet "
Blood may be thicker than water yet, the love they share has no comparasion,
They Both would lay their names and stamp just to stay in each others arms,

"Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast "
the game they may so fight, no gurantee to win
He feels her breath on his face,
Her body close to him,
He cant look in her eyes,
He can't turn the light dim.

"if upon thy rock that younders inside turns cold,
would thee be shore that you could survive,
My black stone pumps only for thee,
I only care for the sun of my soul,"

Their love tainted some would say,
Forbiden love in which still stands still,


"Is love a tender thing? It is too rough,
Too rude, too boist'rous; and it pricks like thorn"


"Virtue itself turns vice, being misapplied,
And vice sometime's by action dignified."


"For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo."

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Romeo and Juliet

Contributed by ju1cy on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:09:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Rivals by name, lovers by heart,
The name in which they hold means power and wealth,
yet everything they want they cannot touch,
their souls intwined by love,

"But soft! What light through yonder window breaks? It is the East and Juliet is the sun!"
He so choose his sun, no nocturnal games shall he play,
The name in which he lays so powerful so strong,
" What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet "
Blood may be thicker than water yet, the love they share has no comparasion,
They Both would lay their names and stamp just to stay in each others arms,

"Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast "
the game they may so fight, no gurantee to win
He feels her breath on his face,
Her body close to him,
He cant look in her eyes,
He can't turn the light dim.

"if upon thy rock that younders inside turns cold,
would thee be shore that you could survive,
My black stone pumps only for thee,
I only care for the sun of my soul,"

Their love tainted some would say,
Forbiden love in which still stands still,


"Is love a tender thing? It is too rough,
Too rude, too boist'rous; and it pricks like thorn"


"Virtue itself turns vice, being misapplied,
And vice sometime's by action dignified."


"For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo."





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Re: Romeo and Juliet (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:42:14 AM AEST
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what you write is true.
but I think you should've left out the quotes and said things your way more.


Re: Romeo and Juliet (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:43:36 AM AEST
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outstanding write
impressive


Re: Romeo and Juliet (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 12:04:47 PM AEST
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a very well written piece.. i liked the flow of this and its quite nicely written great job

vampyress jenni


Re: Romeo and Juliet (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 12:53:43 PM AEST
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This is a very well written piece of work. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy.


sadaddy




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