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Fast paced days
At last, peace in the shade
The garden dirt-
Of which life is essentially made
Reach for me
Please take me away

Sitting close
Distanced space
Resistance placed
Pretty pose
Pull you closer
Fingers gentle on your face
Hear me whisper
Watch me taste
Your skin
Within
My mouth
I am yours
Make me stay

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Keep Me

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:29:36 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I greet you with this sad face
Fast paced days
At last, peace in the shade
The garden dirt-
Of which life is essentially made
Reach for me
Please take me away

Sitting close
Distanced space
Resistance placed
Pretty pose
Pull you closer
Fingers gentle on your face
Hear me whisper
Watch me taste
Your skin
Within
My mouth
I am yours
Make me stay

________
_____

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2007-07-11 03:29:36]
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Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ju1cy on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 07:36:48 AM AEST
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Beautifuly written xx

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:30:15 AM AEST
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Hot, hot, hot.
smiles,
emy

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:08:07 PM AEST
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Damn that was sweet....I'd keep ya....*smiles*. Beautifully penned.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:42:44 PM AEST
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becoming entwined with another soul and making it begin.......what a write, ..beautiful.

brew~

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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jyss..

once again, a great post.
you always seem to say so much
with so little.. and with haunting clarity;

relative to my own experiences of course..lol

B

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST
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i would keep you. i wished and hope i would find a one who would throw words out to me like that . who wouldnt want to keep you if they knew it was worth all you just wrote. excellent write

endless

Re: Keep Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 01:17:52 PM AEST
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I like how even though this poem is sad in nature:

The garden dirt-
Of which life is essentially made
Reach for me
Please take me away

It reaches out to someone, asking to be helped, to be saved from a hopeless existence. Which shows a true strength of character.

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