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[aid] => mick
[title] => INTERNET DATTING
[time] => 2007-07-10 12:30:06
[hometext] => Not intending to offiend anyone but the fools
[bodytext] =>
Spirit Mountain
SultryRose's Signatures
I'm sure many souls get lonely
But I don't wont matramony.
Ain't lookin for games fella.
Just a country gal, no Cindrarella.
Internet dating, oh my, my, my.
Didn't just fall out of the sky.
What in hell would a young foreigner
Won't with a 60 year ole gram mamma?
No, no, no don't mess round with me.
Didn't just fall off turnip truck, see?
Needless to say, no time fo that.
When you see me, tip yo hat.
Us Native Americans ain't weak,
So keep yo Bull ****, I speak.
Ain't no woose so back off!
My sanity won't loose at yo cost.
Gotta keep body in check,
'Cause you're the insane wreck.
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 392
[topic] => 6
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
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INTERNET DATTING
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emystar
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Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:30:06 PM in AEST
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Spirit Mountain
SultryRose's Signatures
I'm sure many souls get lonely
But I don't wont matramony.
Ain't lookin for games fella.
Just a country gal, no Cindrarella.
Internet dating, oh my, my, my.
Didn't just fall out of the sky.
What in hell would a young foreigner
Won't with a 60 year ole gram mamma?
No, no, no don't mess round with me.
Didn't just fall off turnip truck, see?
Needless to say, no time fo that.
When you see me, tip yo hat.
Us Native Americans ain't weak,
So keep yo Bull ****, I speak.
Ain't no woose so back off!
My sanity won't loose at yo cost.
Gotta keep body in check,
'Cause you're the insane wreck.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2007-07-10 12:30:06]
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:34:11 PM AEST
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wow emy this sounds like a very angry write.. i hope you didn't have this experience.. there are all kinds of weirdos out there but this angry expression was wonderous. its like letting out the beast of anger on paper.. great job
rock on,
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 02:25:03 PM AEST
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| Oh wow Emy this hits the heart of my adventures on the net. Heavens I was flown to Washington...ticket in the mail to meet an internet date...met a good friend, that was it . Had flowers sent to me....textmessages across the miles. Been there done that! Conclusion....summary....you can not judge unless you meet face to face. You can't feel the true energy until you are in their physical presence....This is a great piece..thought provoking and a topic to truly consider. Well done girl. |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 02:37:10 PM AEST
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Well I must say you have hit this write out of the ball park with such passion. May your heart be filled with peace and joy once again soon......enjoyed the read.
sadaddy |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 02:50:40 PM AEST
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wow Emy some wierdo must of made a try for huh?What a jerk sheesh .
You take care now
hugs |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 08:42:47 PM AEST
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| Not you Emy, you would never fall for that. I guess it does work for some but why chance it. You said it as it should be. |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:57:11 AM AEST
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this i liked very much i know this place is wiered 2 say the least. another one of your excellent poetic treasures my friend. Tell it like it is.
((((emystar))))
Ben
i don't see told me about i just saw this one but i'll keep an eye out 4 it . . . |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:10:15 AM AEST
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| cool |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by GingerB on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:44:32 AM AEST
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You tell 'em like it is, grrlfriend.
Hugs
Ginny |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:20:14 AM AEST
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Right on...sister...Right on...Hear you loud and clear on this one....I hope he did too.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by brew on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:48:35 PM AEST
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well some can appeal and some can feel yet most are not what they intend to spill.......Yah....yes, its 90% correct, and 10 % not .well it can happen. I loved it.
brew~ |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 05:58:00 PM AEST
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| Emy it is good to be back. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. I would not like to upset you as you have a very sharp pen. I still like your style. bern |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 12:26:11 PM AEST
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well, holy heck emy!! I always knew you were a VERY passionate soul, but WOW!!
You sure nailed this. It leaves very little to the imagination!
Sorry for the 'bad trip", my friend. To every bad side, though, there is a
good side. :) There are ... uhm .... "interesting characters" in every venue.... the
internet is just too damn easy is all. There are many who would take your being
"friendly" as a sign that you want an all night rendezvous. uhm ... NOT!
lol .. anyway .. I hope this dissolved some of that anger, hun. You are
just too darn sweet to be angry. :)
*hugs you tight*
~Breezy |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST
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Sweet friend Emy~
Wow girlfriend you nailed this one hun.
I mirror Breezy's sentiments. I do hope that you feel so much better getting that off ya chest.
May your days & nights be blessed always.
I have missed you heaps girl~
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: INTERNET DATTING
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by ell_03 on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:10:57 AM AEST
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| good write, interesting vernacular |
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