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A mystery of the night,
She was dark and beautiful…
Yet, one of the deadliest creatures alive.

She lived for the nights that she could come back to earth.
She longed for the moments that she could use to watch him.

This woman was no mere mortal,
Yet a cursed soul banished to the Underworld.
This never stopped her.

She always found a way to keep an eye on the one she loved.
This, unfortunately for him, was a terrible thing.

She was a selfish creature.
Whatever she wanted to be hers,
She turned in to her possession.

She wanted him before she was exiled.
Those were for reasons she thought ludicrous.

She only merely tortured a man to death.
Then the creature engaged in a rather intense argument with a dark goddess.
…She lost.

So now she was as she is.
A creature of blood lust, permanently banished from Earth.
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The Dark One

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A mystery of the night,
She was dark and beautiful…
Yet, one of the deadliest creatures alive.

She lived for the nights that she could come back to earth.
She longed for the moments that she could use to watch him.

This woman was no mere mortal,
Yet a cursed soul banished to the Underworld.
This never stopped her.

She always found a way to keep an eye on the one she loved.
This, unfortunately for him, was a terrible thing.

She was a selfish creature.
Whatever she wanted to be hers,
She turned in to her possession.

She wanted him before she was exiled.
Those were for reasons she thought ludicrous.

She only merely tortured a man to death.
Then the creature engaged in a rather intense argument with a dark goddess.
…She lost.

So now she was as she is.
A creature of blood lust, permanently banished from Earth.

Copyright Â© Angelic_Demon ... [ 2007-07-10 12:18:07]
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Re: The Dark One (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:36:08 PM AEST
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wow a beautiful dark write.. glad to see you writing again. this sounds like a dark story very enchanting.. awesome job

rock on

vampyress Jenni

Re: The Dark One (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:50:05 PM AEST
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AWESOME JOB BABE, love the depth of this write, glad to see you post again, keep writing, HUGS

Re: The Dark One (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 12:58:10 PM AEST
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love it as i do everything you write my dear, ive a new respect for your constant devotion to your novel which i suspect this poem will fall into, thanks again for letting me read it, an honor indeed!

hugs n' love mom

roses

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