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that can never be erased.
It’s a feeling she gives me
every time I see her face.

I don’t know why
but I would like to see her in lace.
Whilst I admire her face
for nothing shall ever take its place.

There is nothing more that I’d like to do
then to grab her and never come unglued.
If I could I would stick to her forever and ever
and watch our feelings take flight.

She makes me want to tell her
“Everything will be alright,”
as I grab her and hold her tight.
For there is nothing more I’d like to do
then end her plight.

She is like a delicate rose
that has taken its thorny steam
and wrapped around my heart.
Suffocating it, yet letting it live
freely and happily whilst ripping it apart.
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Untitled Love

Contributed by Livin_In_Sin on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:04:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There is a feeling I get
that can never be erased.
It’s a feeling she gives me
every time I see her face.

I don’t know why
but I would like to see her in lace.
Whilst I admire her face
for nothing shall ever take its place.

There is nothing more that I’d like to do
then to grab her and never come unglued.
If I could I would stick to her forever and ever
and watch our feelings take flight.

She makes me want to tell her
“Everything will be alright,”
as I grab her and hold her tight.
For there is nothing more I’d like to do
then end her plight.

She is like a delicate rose
that has taken its thorny steam
and wrapped around my heart.
Suffocating it, yet letting it live
freely and happily whilst ripping it apart.

Copyright Â© Livin_In_Sin ... [ 2007-07-10 12:04:05]
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Re: Untitled Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 04:01:57 PM AEST
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Perfecto, Don't change a thing!
Awesome writing.
huggs, smiles, peace, welcome,
emy

Re: Untitled Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ju1cy on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 07:31:21 AM AEST
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It is a wonderfull poem.! i dnt think u need to make any changes!

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