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causes a rise of cries, as night's His disguise.
That's when the Devil is upsheveled,
and you're level with a sky of lies.

Eternally burning,
and internally hurting,
His heart broke apart;
spoke of yearning for journey.

For Winter had splintered the wood,
and He misunderstood;
Mistaking and breaking,
and hindering good.

I could tell by His tone,
that His dopey, old bones,
Snapped and tapped,
while He grappled for souls.

With demise in His eyes,
He must blindly despise,
All who baffledly raffle,
with this Jackel, their lives.

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He Who Is the Devil

Contributed by allforyou on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 03:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He hides inside the tides,
causes a rise of cries, as night's His disguise.
That's when the Devil is upsheveled,
and you're level with a sky of lies.

Eternally burning,
and internally hurting,
His heart broke apart;
spoke of yearning for journey.

For Winter had splintered the wood,
and He misunderstood;
Mistaking and breaking,
and hindering good.

I could tell by His tone,
that His dopey, old bones,
Snapped and tapped,
while He grappled for souls.

With demise in His eyes,
He must blindly despise,
All who baffledly raffle,
with this Jackel, their lives.

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2007-07-09 15:12:52]
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Re: He Who Is the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 03:21:38 PM AEST
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kind of gave me a chill or two, yes I think that damn devil can come in many forms too

good write

Michelle

Re: He Who Is the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 06:02:00 PM AEST
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Yeah, that pucky ole thing.
yeah I see him around here-n-there but and he likes to window peek from time to time.
As long as he don't try to come in the house 'cause I have no use for him.
Great work.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: He Who Is the Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 03:13:57 PM AEST
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wow, that was awesome, i love the rhyme scheme and the flow... great job!

wiz

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